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Question: What alternative ending would you have prefer reading about in Breaking Dawn!?
I hated the one the author wrote, It seems like she is shoving down our throat this forced Happiness!. I hate Jacob imprinting on Nessie (that's way disturbing, he could have stayed to his guns on hating Vampires)Www@QuestionHome@Com


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I'm actually writing an alternate version of Breaking Dawn so it goes the way I want it to!.
In MY version, Bella and Edward get married and go on a honeymoon!. My version has MUCH more steaminess between Bella and Edward :) They come back because Bella isn't quite ready to separate from the people she loves in her human life!. She goes to La Push with Charlie and takes a walk with Jacob to iron out their issues and secure the treaty before she's turned!. Bella falls, being Bella, and lands next to a Western Rattle Snake which bites her!. The bite is close to her heart, so there's little chance of survial!. Jacob rushes her to the Cullens to try to save her, even if the only way to do that is by changing her!. He feels guilty because she was with him and he should have been protecting her!. He leaves the Cullens house before he knows if she's okay!. There's nothing Carlisle can do about the rattle snake venom, so Edward changes her!. Everyone in Forks, including Charlie, thinks Bella died from the snake bite!. The Cullens stay in Forks while Bella is adjusting to her new lifestyle, but she stays out of the public eye!. She developes that cool shielding ability!. She comes across Jacob while hunting, and they make up because he feels like it's his fault she had to change!. The Volturi come by to check on Bella and Aro decides he wants her for his collection!. Caius is unhappy about the Pack and they use that as a reason to go on the offensive against the Cullens!. There's a big battle scene where the Cullens and the Volturi fight, and Jacob kills Caius, but is mortally wounded in the process!. The Volturi agree to leave, cordially, because Aro says that it was all Caius with his temper that wanted them to fight anyway and there's no need for further hostilities or bloodshed!. Bella gets to say good bye to Jacob in a very touching scene and Jacob says that he understands better now and respects Edward before he dies!. Bella will always carry that pain with her, but ends up living happily forever with Edward and the rest of the Cullens!.
The End!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I wish Edward and Bella went to their meadow at least once!!
I mean, it had such significance to them!.!.!. twilight edward takes her there and shows how he sparkles and then they kiss when they leave!.!.!. New Moon, Bella takes Jacob to look for the meadow cause she wants to hear Edwards voice!.!. Eclipse, Edward takes bella there after she lets alice have her way, and edward gives up his end of the deal and says "i love you!. i want you!. right now!." and then breaking dawn its not even there!. That made me sad!. I also wish there was a battle at the end of the book, but no one tooooo important!.!. Because i was crying when everyone was saying goodbye and i love you when the volturi were making there decision, because i was expecting a fight, but then they just talked it out, which i was both relieved [that no one would die] and sad because i wanted more action!.
I still loved the book though, i'm going to reread it because i think alot of the reasons people dont like it is because they were so closeminded about renesmee and bella having a baby and stuff, so although i like it, i am oging to reread it and be open minded and not as hasty with reading!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

?I wanted the fight at the end to actually happen! I mean, it didn't happen the last time we thought it was going to so it definitley should have happened this time!. It kinda left the ending open, I mean she left the Volturi still alive, forever!.

?And I also the think the ending was too happy! The only one to die was a sister from Tanya's clan!? I hoped maybe Rosalie turns into a better person and maybe she and Emmett died during the battle, like a sad part!.!.!.the book needed one because there were like no parts in the book that were sad!

?I didn't like the whole pregnancy thing! I thought Edward had no bodily fluids! How was it possible she got pregnant!? Nessie was cute, but very weird and unnecessary!.

?I think Jacob and Leah should have been together in the end!.

?She shouldn't have been able to tell Charlie ANYTHING!. That just added to the overly happy ending!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i thought that a comet should have crashed into the earth, and after eliminating all supernatural beings like the asteroid that heralded the end of the dinosaurs, bella decides to get a life, join the peace corps, and actually contribute something to society!.

that's just nobel material, isn't it!?

don't get me wrong, i love fantasy, but still!.!.!.the twilight series was way too mushy!.

*celebrindal*Www@QuestionHome@Com

The Cullens/other random covens should have completely destroyed the Volturi and then the Cullens should have become the "rulers" of or take the place of the Volturi in the vampire world :) I would have preferred a battle scene at the end rather than them just talking it out, oh well!.!.!.!.!.!.!.hope u like it!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I wasn't too fond of Jacob imprinting on Nessie either!. I wanted there to be an actual fight and I wanted Edward to finally put his foot down, Jacob "won" too many times [I'm talking about Bella and how his feelings always came first and Nessie how he got to be around her more then Edward]Www@QuestionHome@Com

i wish the author didnt tell what bella was like whne she was a vampire!. she should have left it a mystery or something!. the ending should have been like "and then he bit me!.!.!.!.!.!."

and the fact that she got pregnant, meyer should have left that out!.

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I kind of wished someone important could have died!. I was pissed there was no fighting!. I agree it was a little too happy at the endWww@QuestionHome@Com

I would have liked for Jacob to imprint on Leah! And Nessie to end up with Nahuel! Www@QuestionHome@Com