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Position:Home>Books & Authors> Calling all intelligent and creative minds!Question: Calling all intelligent and creative minds! In my novel, the main charactor's sister is anorexic and gets sick in the begining of the book from lack of food!. The main charactor now thinks her sister is recovering when she's not!. They are now going for a walk, which turns into a run, and her sister will feel sick during the run, what should happen!? Should the sister faint and the main charactor not have a cell phone!? Or what!?
Thanks for your answers!Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: The main character should run a bit faster, get ahead of her sister to see the view!. The sister should begin to feel out of breath and stretch out a hand for helf!. As she is out of breath she can't call out to the main character!. The main character expounds on the view, then turns back to see the sisters reaction, and notices that she has fainted!. Then you can reveal that as hercell phone battery was down, she did not take it!. Hope this helps!. Best of luck!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com Ooh! That would be cool! Yeah, they are running and laughing happily, when suddenly the sister slows down dramaticaly and the main character keeps on running, thinking that she tired her out and then she collapses and the main character rushes back but sister is already unconcious!. Main character searches her pockets for a cell phone, but then remembers that she left it lying on the coffee table in her house!. Frantically she runs to the nearby gas station and calls 911 on their phone!. But when she returns, her sister is gone and in her place is a letter written by a serial killer that hasn't been caught yet!. Do you like it!?!?!? I think it would make your story interesting! Well, you dont have to include the part where the serial killer takes her, but its just a twist!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I think that each girl will have had food packed for them!. When the anorexic one faints from exhaustion, the otehr sister should search the anorexic's backpack for her lunch, because she ate her own prior to the run!. It turns out that there is no lunchbox inside the bag- and so the girl must have unpacked it purposely!.Www@QuestionHome@Com The anorexic sister could insist on walking farther and farther away from their home!. They could pass a small grocery store or cafe, and the main character could suggest stopping for a snack!. The anorexic sister could refuse--main character gets nervous--anorexic sister collapses near a busy intersection--main character goes into hysterics!. Www@QuestionHome@Com I think the other sisters phone should ring with a message that calls her away from her run!. And she takes the starving sister along!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |