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I'm not sure if you have to have a membership to read it, but please tell me what you think!.
It was in a response to a writing prompt that went something like this:
Write a short story about letting go that involves a factory worker, the setting as a small apartment, and the locket as the key object!.
Thanks for all your critique and suggestions! :)Www@QuestionHome@Com