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Question: How do you think of my story so far!? Any constructive criticism/suggestions!?

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It seems like it could be good with some work!. You should lengthen the chapters a bit!. I like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Its pretty good, just one thing!.

If the girl was number one in her school/class, she would actually be taking AP Classes, not honors!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

:) It's nice though the chapters do need to be longer!.!.!.!.!.
I want to know what happens next!.!.!.!.I'm glad I have a fictionpress acount!.!.!.!.!.Now i'll know when there's more to read!. :) :)
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