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The Someone Outside the Gate

THE FIRST TIME I NOTICED HER, she was sitting outside the gate!. There was the sound of a shower of birdseed, all hitting the street at the same time!. I ran to the picture-window and stared past the glass!. The heavens opened with a mighty roar!. Sheets of rain penetrated the concrete, swirling together into thousands of puddles!. A white flash lit up the sky and disappeared!. Then I saw her!. She was little more than a distant figure from the window I crouched at, but I could still see her pretty clearly!. Her eyes were shut and her head was tipped back, leaning against the wall!. Tangled brown hair cascaded down her shoulders, dripping onto her face!. She wore a white sundress, dotted with specks of muddy water and grime, and black sandals!.
And the first thought that crossed my mind was, Who was she!?
That was the first time!. It wasn’t the last!.

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