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Question: Please , Comments on my Sci-fic story breif outline!. (Reli short)!?
Please, tell me how i can make it better!. What is bad, wat is good!.
This my english sci-fic story, 800word story!.

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In the future(around 2500) 5000 people from Earth move to the moon to live!. They found it was perfect, until they are slowly being killed and eating by a MOON MONSTER, who lived on the moon!.

He slowlys kills the human, and the human manage to report this to Earth and therefore they never live on the moon again!.


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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It's okay!? I dunno, what do the humans do to try and defeat the moon monster!?

I'm guessing it's called 'Man on the Moon' or something cheesy!.Www@QuestionHome@Com