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Position:Home>Books & Authors> Do you like the song I wrote?? (Don't think about it its copyrighted)?Question: Do you like the song I wrote!?!? (Don't think about it its copyrighted)!? Here it is: It's called "I Looked Up To You"
I looked up to you Before I knew What you where doing when no one was paying attention Now all I feel when I'm near you is tension It's not done yet What do you think of it!?!? Be honest!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: It's okay, but the difference in length between "Before I knew" and "What you where doing when no one was paying attention" is really big, and it could throw off the beat!. When you read it, jsut the words with out a beat, I will tell you what it honestly sounds like!. You looked up to someone, a father figure maybe an older freind, a boy!. then when no one was paying attention, you raped me or something!. and now you feel the tension but you wont tell anyone what happened!. but its good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Interesting!.!.!. but you know that a song is not only the lyrics and words, but also the melody and how it is presented when you sing it!.!.!.!. I like the first two lines, but the 3rd one feels a bit wordy and rushed!.!.!. Of course, like I said, it depends on how you sing itWww@QuestionHome@Com Honest!? i doubt ill ever hear it on the radio!. Its mediocre at best!. also I know for a fact you didn't copywright this!. However i wouldnt wory about it being stolen -_-!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Good start, keep going!Www@QuestionHome@Com idk i need to hear the musicWww@QuestionHome@Com yea its pretty goodWww@QuestionHome@Com |