Any one want to read my fic?

Question: Any one want to read my fic!?

Its about Cold Case haha

Im cool!.

http://www!.fanfiction!.net/s/4382044/1/No!.!.!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I found what you've written quite interesting; I read it in its entirety, so you can interpret that fact to mean that it held my attention!. I liked your style -- the short clipped sentences!. I would definitely encourage you to continue with the story; you've invested time and effort in it, so see where it takes you if you expand it!. You do have a few spelling errors: brake should be break; passed (twice) should be past; there is a Than beginning a sentence which should be Then!. Those are minor, of course, but, as one who also writes, I am somewhat of a perfectionist! Anyway, good luck with your writing!Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is a really good article!. I deeply think that maybe you could write a novel, which is one of my dreams!. I am really jelous of your style of writing, and you are very fluent with the english language!. Congratulations!Www@QuestionHome@Com