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Position:Home>Books & Authors> Okay, I'm going to swallow my pride here...?Question: Okay, I'm going to swallow my pride here!.!.!.!? What is YOUR opinion!? Yes, I am actually asking this - feel free to gasp!.
http://www!.fictionpress!.com/s/2531670/1/!.!.!. It's kinda long so feel free to read only one or two sections and tell me what you think, or review directly (anonymously) on the site itself!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Well, first of all I actually like the name: The Four Humors!. And it was quite interesting!. Dark and delicious!. It was eloquently put and it sounds scary!. I've never read a Stephen King novel but this sounds like it could give it a run for it's money!. And I'm not a fan of blood--the sight and smell makes me sick--but this actually made me, for a second, forget about how much pain seeing blood causes me!. I'm sure they'll like it!. You took a chance and swallowed your pride!. I think it's paid off!. Good luck!Www@QuestionHome@Com I read the first chapter!.!.!. insert, whatever you'd like to call it!. I absolutely love your writing style!. I don't know what it is, but it sounds mature- and grasping!. All the while it makes sense, and comes off as completely clever!. I enjoyed reading it, and I would have continued reading the rest, except it's been a long day and I'm ready to go to bed!. I hope you don't mind me saving the link!.!.!. to view later!. Thanks for posting your writing, it's beautifully done!. P!.s- Gasp!Www@QuestionHome@Com I have not read your work, but being on a board that screens prospective students, submit something short, deep, and with a solid thesis that has follow through!. You could also submit 4 pieces of writing, one for each text type, to show your versatility!. Good luck and always strive for the best!.Www@QuestionHome@Com It was very dark and weird and scary!.!.!. yet I had to keep reading and I wanted to know more!. Its good! However, if you are wanting to go to a new highschool and you have to submit some pieces, it must be a private or prestigious school, so maybe that piece isn't the way to go!. They might think you are obsessed with blood and death and not let you in for fear you will make their school teh next Virginia Tech or Columbine!. Just something to think about!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I agree!. If you submitted this to a school and I read it, it would give me pause!. It is too out there!. Think more mainstream!. Schools are having to be more careful about student's backgrounds!. Write something simple and mainstream!. You don't want to end up in the shrink's office!. Sorry but "enchanting" isn't a word I would use to describe this!. Pax-CWww@QuestionHome@Com i think that is really good!. i would so read it! it is sort of twisted and eerie but it is!.!.!.enchanting! you should defiately show your new high school that because they will be blown away :PWww@QuestionHome@Com |