My short story...how do you rate it?

Question: My short story!.!.!.how do you rate it!?

There was once!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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Awsome- soo much detail- i think that happened to me onceWww@QuestionHome@Com

This critique should take about an hour!. Not!!! I am only answering your silly question for the 2 points!. I guess that makes me a scavenger and I bet you don't even know what that means!. I put more effort into my answer than you did your question and it cost you 5 points!. Who's counting!? Words, that is!. LOLWww@QuestionHome@Com

I don't seeing as it's not a story, it's a grammatically-wrong sentence!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Still awaiting your "short story"Www@QuestionHome@Com

And the author lived happily ever after!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

hahaha!.
simply breathe taking!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

oh my goodness! the detail just blows me away! 5 Stars!
*cries* no story will ever live up to this one everWww@QuestionHome@Com

Nice one!.!.
You will be a legendary!.!.
I promise!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think that is the shortest story ever!Www@QuestionHome@Com

got nothing to do either huh!?!Www@QuestionHome@Com