A silly poem I wrote when I was about 7, critique if you like.?

Question: A silly poem I wrote when I was about 7, critique if you like!.!?

I wish that my room had a floor
I do not much care for a door
The ceiling is nice
but I'd better think twice
before I fall and make myself soreWww@QuestionHome@Com

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Not so original!.!.!.!.!.!. a similar limerick was written many many years ago, and a book by Rafael Woolf was also written with the title "I Wish That My Room Had A Floor"!.

I wish that my room had a floor!.
I don't so much care for a door!.
But this crawling around
Without touching the ground
Is getting to be quite a bore!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That's a really great poem!. When i was 7 i don't think i could've rhymed!. If you wrote that when you were seven, you can write ten times better poems now, so try it again!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

the last line doesnt follow the pattern you had set, but it was very good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

whoa you dont have a floor!? otherwise very goodWww@QuestionHome@Com

it was going somewhere unitl the last line!.Www@QuestionHome@Com