Our class is doing a short story assignment over the summer!. Does this story sound interesting (and guys, be honest!. I don't really care if you say it sucks, I'll just fix the parts you don't like!)
A British 19 sailor-orphan boy saves a rich girl from a runaway carriage!. They fall in love and have a fling (-; One day, he comes to see her and she is GONE! A year later, she stows away on the boat the sailor's working on!. She tells him that she is running away to Britain to find a orphanage!. She tells him she had this affair with a guy in America and had twins but her EVIL dad sent them away to Britain!. The sailor-orphan is pissed off but forgives her eventually and falls back in love!. The ship hits a storm and is looted by criminals!. The girl secretly slips a note into the boy's pocket!. An employee of EVIL dad's kills the girl!. The boy goes slightly crazy and is accused of murdering her (by her EVIL dad)!. He is sentenced to die, and in his cell discovers the note!. He asks his brotherWww@QuestionHome@Com