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Question: I jus wrote a short poem please read leave comment!?
There is this girl I long for everyday

When we talk I lose my breathe nd don’t know wat to say

She has pretty eyes nd little cheeks

When she laughs they turn pink
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Evrynight I dream nd ask myself will we ever be!?

Or is she pretty much out of my league!?

Everyday my love for her grows stronger & stronger

And when we conversate I ponder & ponder

Thinking does she have feelings for me!?

But I will never knoe nd until then my heart grows colder than icy snow…Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
That was really good!. I liked the imagery!. Keep writing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow!. that is really good!.
very romantic!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com