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Derek,
How do I begin to tell you what you have done to my life!?
Well, I guess I’ll start with my first Yankee game--the day déjà vu started to take over my life!. Nothing could stop anyone from dragging me down to New York, where I was about to be brought into something which I consider the hardest thing to ever go through when I comes to love!. From the day that I saw you up to now, I felt as though I have been hand cuffed!. Not even I can stop it!.
I’ll start here: On that day, the first day I saw you, I felt like the whole world had been drugged, making it seem like all they cared about was you!. As for me, something was going to happen!.
Ever since that day, I would get feelings that you would never be able to explain!. I’ve been through confusion and serendipity that no one could put to words!. I’ve had the most breathtaking visions and feelings that give me so much pain, it’s indescribable!.
I don’t care what people think!. I don’t care what people say!. I don’t care if you’re seeing someone or if people are against me!. I need to talk to you!. It’s more important then anything to me!.
My life is a freefall!. And its all because of what happened to me on that day in September!. Its all because of the fact that you were watching me on that day!. So much has happened to me!. And after all I’ve been through, I truly believe that I am the one for you!. I don’t know what you might be thinking at this moment, but I’m not exactly what you would consider someone who just loves you!. I love you for your soul and who you are as a person!. There’s so much more to it!. I just need to talk to you!.
Please take the time to think about me!. I am just praying that this will get to you, someway, somehow!.
,JenniferWww@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Awww!.!.!.!. I love it! It's sooo romantic and dramatic!. Don't listen to any losers who say bad stuff about it!. It's amazing!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
pssshhhhh hes deffinitly going to think you are a crazy psycho freak that needs to get some friends and a life!.!.!.!.!.oh wait you areeeee a crazy psycho freak that needs to get some friends and a lifee
baaaaahahahahahahaaWww@QuestionHome@Com
It's pretty dramatic and wordy!. He will think you are on drugs or alcohol if you send it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
i luv that its very sentimental!.!.!.!.!.!. i LUV it and i promiseDerek will tooWww@QuestionHome@Com
hahahaha!.pink!.!.!.!.
ummm, it sounds good but like they said its too dramatic!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
omg!.!.that was!.!.amazing!. you really put your heart into it!. i wish you the best!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Without trying to sound mean, but is it at all possible you have built this guy up in your head to a point where you believe you love him, but you really just love the way you think he will make you feel if you get him!? If the guy is seeing someone else, he obviously doesnt have the same feelings or is as passionate as you, or he would've done something about it, right!?
Now you are saying!.!.!.why am i being so negative!? Well I was young once too and i knew plenty of girls like you that focus'ed on a guy that didnt return the feelings, meanwhile there would be a guy with feelings for that girl and she would'nt give him the time of day because she thought her "Derek" was her soulmate!.
Im sure there will be a lot of guys that "watch" you in the future!. That doesnt mean much!. You need to go find someone that actually does more than just watch you and cares about you, cause any old stalker can watch you!.
*edit* I just noticed this is in the books & authors catagory lol!. If in fact this is not a real letter, then i gotta say, thats good writing!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com