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Question: Short story intro!? Yes, I've posted it before!.!.!.!?
!.!.!.but this first part is due tomorrow, and I would appreciate more feedback!. Thanks!



Tick tick tick!. The constant noise in my mind is going to drive me mad!. Tick tick tick!. Shut up, SHUT UP! I held my eyes shut tight and clenched my fists as hard as I could, but I am unable to quiet the explosive inside myself that is sure to go off at any second!. Never again, will I do this to myself, never again!. I'm done, I quit!. I'm done!. Even in my current state I know that is a lie!. I need this, every bit of it!. I can hardly comprehend living any other way!. It is not only the drug I am addicted to, it is also the lifestyle!. The struggle, I need the struggle!. Not knowing where I am going to sleep each night, and other uncertainties, are what keep my heart beating!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Very good! exellent vocabulary use and it's a very detailed piece! it flows, like a poem and it's full of empathy which makes me so desperate to read on!
please post the remainder of the story when you can!Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's definatly interesting!. I really want to read the rest now!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

this story is really good
and interesting
and detailedWww@QuestionHome@Com

dude i lLIKE IT!! i want to read the rest!!
i would give you an A+Www@QuestionHome@Com

you are GOOD!

that is an amazing beginning!.!.!.
i really want to know how it ends know!Www@QuestionHome@Com