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Question: Do you like my writing style!?
This is a short story that I wrote!. It was kind of a flow of thought thing, and I didn't really any definite idea in my mind when I was writing it (I enjoy doing that sometimes)!. I wrote it in thirty minutes while watching 'The Ring'!.!.!.so yeah!. Needless to say, it ended up kind of like The Ring!.
http://www!.writing!.com/main/view_item/it!.!.!.I'm asking whether my writing style is any good, not whether the story is, because, like I said, I wrote it in thirty minutes and I kind of rushed the ending!.
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Haha i actually really enjoyed that!. This isn't my normal style when it comes to reading material, but i actually found it quite interesting!. Heck, i even screamed "ew" out loud during the part in which they were informed that the demon was inside the child!.
The only thing that was a bit iffy was the transition from paragraphs 1 to 2!. The whole, my daughter came up to show me these bite marks, was a bit too sudden but overall, i think you really have something with this!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I enjoyed reading this story, it was fun!. The ending was rushed, as you said!.!.!. which kind of sucked as a reader considering I wanted more!.!.!. but, very good writing style!. The father sounds younger than fathers normally do, but it was pretty damn good!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com
That is fabulous!!! Very flowing, you're right it relates to the Ring!. Ending is okay, alright, not bad at all!. =DWww@QuestionHome@Com
I deffinatly think you've got potential :DWww@QuestionHome@Com
Very good!. I really enjoyed it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com