What do you think about this? please do tell me?

Question: What do you think about this!? please do tell me!?

A poem on the victims of war

fearful of another tragic epidemic
the fear still lingers inside
echoes of the past set the scene
the door to new realms arnt easy to find
to hatch into new light, can dreams be made
crash and blow the victims weep
meaningless circle starting over againWww@QuestionHome@Com

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sounds intresting but more like a trailer teaser for some movie, if trying to write a story that's more like a intro to what the book might offer, but not solid enough to show what the story might bring!? or what it is!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow!. I really like it!. It's very meaningful; deep!. Consider getting it published!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

you have amazing insight!.
you have a real gift; please continue to shareWww@QuestionHome@Com