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Question: What if Edward had never come back!?!? TWILIGHT LOVERS, this is for you!.!? (All Finished)!?
Okay, so i was re-reading New Moon yesterday and i was thinking, what if Bella had waited for Jake at his house, never jumped the cliff, and alice never came back!?!? Abd I know I know that Edward said later that he wouldve come back anyway, but what if he hadn't!?!? I hate to think that he wouldn't because I LOVE EDWARD! and i think bella belongs with him!.!. but what if that hadn't happened!?So i wrote an alternate ending last night!. Just for fun!. I know I'm no Stephenie Meyer, but i don't think its too bad!.!.
~~SideNote::: I'll keeping adding it on, so be patient, it could take a while for me to type out!.!.
13 years later, if Edward had never come back :
With the same old key from under the eave i unlocked the door and stepped inside!. After all of these years barely anything had changed!. the yellow cabinets were fading, and Charlie had added my wedding picture to his mantle, but beside that, it looked the same as it did the day I moved in here!. (hold on i will continue with it)Www@QuestionHome@Com
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OMG!!!! I am crying!!!!!! You did a great job!!! I LOVED it, well actually I hated it, but it was REALLY REALLY REALLY good! you are an amazing writer! I seriously can't control myself right now!. I'm sorry If i sound like a crazy person right now, I'm not, promise! That was truly heartbreaking!. At least it was to me! I am putting a thumbs down to anybody who didnt' like it, if there is anybody! lol!. but I probably will for real!. haha!.
Great job!!! And don't say you're no stephenie meyer, because I could totally see that as how it ends in breaking dawn!. I hope it doesn't, but who knows!.
Thanks sooooo much for putting it out there!. It was great for me to read!.!.!. oh, and I'm STILL crying!. lolWww@QuestionHome@Com
I really liked the parts with Jacob at the beginning!. Then when you said it gets sad, it got a little strange!. I'd think after all those years she would love Jacob and not go to Edward so easily, like say something about how it wasn't fair because Jacob never left her side but Edward did!. I also kind of thought it was weird that she was 87 and he was 17!. I mean, I know he's much older but just think about that picture it's a little disturbing!. But, the first part with Jacob was really good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
lmao!.!.!.
THAT, my friend is ALOT of reading!.
maybe you should write a book!.
im just going to go with the Q,
if edward never came back, the world will be a happier place!.
in my opinion!. b/c i do not like that kid!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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I hated that!. No offense, but yea, thats because I have!.!.!.um!.!.!.Edward Cullen Obssesive Disorder XD And if Edward never came back, the books would've probably maybe sucked XDWww@QuestionHome@Com
nice story !.!.!. though its very sad!. I cant imagine Bella having kids with jacob!.!.!.eww [team Edward] !. But i liked the ending even if its a sad one!.!.!.at least they still ended up together!. Bella and Edward is love!. Theyre just meant to be!.
For me if Edward had never come back [that time] , bella will obviously suffer but shell try to move on but in the end theyle still end up in each others arms!. You know , theyre destined for each other!. Bella will always belong to Edward so as Edward will always belong to her!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
ohmigosh!
that made me cry so hard!!!!!!!!!!!!
i loved and hated it!
i am glad that edward came back tho because once you put it that way it seems like she couldn't live without him!.
*sob* i'm still crying!
Wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!Www@QuestionHome@Com
OMG I LOVE THIS!!! anyway!.!.!.
if eddy (lol) didnt return, it would of turned out that wayWww@QuestionHome@Com
omg!!!!!! i love/hated it!
loves it because it was so good
hated because edward actually didnt come back!!!!!
u should write a book!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Oh god!.!.!.Im seriously crying!. Well I love edward, and first I was like is this actually from the book!? Oh god!.!.!.if Edward never came back I'd kill stephanie meyer!. No!. But I wouldn't be happy with her!. I loved it you did a great job!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
whoa i did cry specialy' the end partWww@QuestionHome@Com
I will definetely read this when i have time!! i can't wait to see what you think! Sorry i can't read it now, but i will!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Make a love/supernatural book now bc I would so be buying it like I have bought all of the Twilight books!! WRITE AWAY and let me know when you make a lot of money!!!lol Great story I loved it and do you do FanFic!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
wow that was so good!. it was really sad at the end though!. if edward had never come back i would have cried! lol!. but at least he came back in your story!.!.!.they get to be together in the end!. awww how sad lol!. you should seriously write more stories that was amzing!. i will be your number 1 fan!. he he lol
great job on the story(sorry i am saying that a lot but it was really good!)Www@QuestionHome@Com