What do you think of this drawing? (pic included)?

Question: What do you think of this drawing!? (pic included)!?

I'm a bit of an amateur artist and I came up with this drawing for what it means to succeed!. The idea just kinda struck me!.!. is it a good drawing, does it convey the message!? What do you think I could do to it to make it stand out more!? I was on the verge of adding color w/ photoshop but my computer crashed but I got a up and running again some I'll be finishing that soon, any other ideas though!?!? Thanks!

Drawing:
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

The concept is better as a black/white!. I wouldn't recommend coloring!.

Add more tone so the lines are not so dominating!. Give the background a texture (pattern) so it's not so plain - this will also bring out the winning hand!.Www@QuestionHome@Com