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Question: Will you please critique my photography!?
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With the three purple flowers, I would crop the bottom a bit so that there's less focus (composition-wise) on the bottom-most flower, which is out of optical focus!. The light at the far end is interesting!. Though it might benefit from a minor increase in brightness and contrast so the flowers are easier to see!.

This one (also lacking title) would be fine!. You just need to include the rest of the head!. http://www!.flickr!.com/photos/28304819@N0!.!.!. We don't send people to the guillotine these days!.

'Froggy' as a photo isn't very exciting, but that's all right!. It's still cute!. Although it's a toad!.!.!.

Deformed Heart is sort of a cliché concept these days!. Nothing wrong with that necessarily!. However, I would either get a more interesting background (something that matches the concept), or open the aperture to around 3!.5 and choose a very bright, colourful background!. Such as fairground lights!. Then focus on your hands instead so the lights are just a blur of bright spots!. Although I don't know if your camera allows for aperture adjustment!. also zoom in and move your hands further from the flash so they aren't blown out!. Or if you can't do that, use external flash or other form of lighting!. The flash just destroys your hands in that shot!.

Marrianne is a little odd!.!.!.Just the lighting and her pose!. I don't know what I would suggest; I'm just letting you know!. :-P There's nothing wrong with it, really!.

Everything else is either all right or excellent!. Especially Double Rainbow!. That's worth money!. You definitely show potential to be quite the artist!. If you don't have one already, look into gettting an SLR!. I recommend film, but either way is fine!. Don't worry too much about the camera!. :-)Www@QuestionHome@Com

They are snapshots!. You need to learn about the basics of exposure and composition if you are to progress any further!. Examples
: deformed heart: frame is out of focus and badly overexposed!. Rainbow: nearly a good shot but needs a crop of the bottom!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

the rainbow pic is the only on I see with potential!. The large black area at the bottom is a bother to me!. It makes the photo incomplete!. My eye is truly drawn to the sign before the rainbow!. But is pleased by the scene!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Great! I love the grasshopper!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Cool work! Rainbow & sign are great!.Www@QuestionHome@Com