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Position:Home>Visual Arts> Comments based on my photography?Question: Comments based on my photography!? Check out these photos!. Feedback, input and criticism would be great!. Let me know what you think!.
1!.http://picasaweb!.google!.com/alexlamburin!.!.!. 2!.http://picasaweb!.google!.com/alexlamburin!.!.!. 3!.http://picasaweb!.google!.com/alexlamburin!.!.!. 4!.http://picasaweb!.google!.com/alexlamburin!.!.!. Thanks in advance!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Great color composition!. Nice exposures, with appropriate depth of field!. All are 'pretty'!. Framing feels calculated!. The shoes are their own cliche!. That is, the same shot with anything else on the wire would not be diminished by the distraction of the urban phenomena that is 'shoe(s) on the wire', and the viewer could truly get lost in the sense of sky captured in this shot!. My eyes drift around the flower looking for a petal to focus on - the flower almost seems to be a motion shot - it looks like an autofocus shot where the autofocus chose to focus on the hip of the flower (the green element protruding towards the viewer), instead of a more natural point of focus!. The older hand tends to dominate the shot - the flower is an interesting transition point from the smooth young skin to the older, more detailed, skin, but those elements are not in balance!. The hand press is interesting, but I find myself wanting a closer shot, from a more complicated angle (for example, maybe if you made it hard for the viewer to tell if the handprint is imprinted, which it is, or 'embossed', which it almost could be)!. Nice colors in this one, as with all, but the glare spot to the left (near the spot of deep yellow, which adds a nice touch of mystery, but draws the eye towards the spot o'glare)!. P!.S!. Nice capture of a butterfly in flight @ http://picasaweb!.google!.com/alexlamburin!.!.!. And gorgeous color in a rare capture of the *organic* nature of the flower @ http://picasaweb!.google!.com/alexlamburin!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com i really like this one http://picasaweb!.google!.com/alexlamburin!.!.!. the others i find lacking in energy, the hands almost work but its kinda forcedWww@QuestionHome@Com These are very good!. The only tip I'd give you is to capture things with more of a meaning to it!. Such as love or happiness or even anger!. Assemble objects to if you want!.Www@QuestionHome@Com This is my opinion ~~The ones I like best are ~2Hands on chain~the window~ the silhouette of the shoes ~~ & the hand print in the sand~I think you are developing an interesting eye ~ just keep at it ~Www@QuestionHome@Com well they are pretty good!.!. some of them don't really flow for me!.!.!. i don't like the flower one but i like the one with the handsWww@QuestionHome@Com |