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Question: I've posted 5 new photos for critique!. Please be honest!.!?
Thank you in advance!.

http://www!.flickr!.com/photos/20392040@N0!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


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I actually think you are on to something here!. Looking at what you are doing with your composition, how you are handling textures and colors, foreground versus backgrounds, etc, you are developing a nice eye for the photographic pursuit!.

Is this set worthy of publishing or maybe a fine art show!? I don't know!. There are things as a creative director or fellow artist that I'd like to see you push further!. Perhaps take more risks with negative space!. Break away from center focused balance or composition!. Don't be afraid to go black and white!. Use a flash!. Experiment more with subject matter!.

That being said, it takes time to get comfortable with your medium and your tools!. So, good start! Keep going, keep pushing the envelope and keep sharing!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well for the most part I like the one with the sunset best!. The silhouette of the what looks like a!.!.!.!. I don't know what it looks like, :P! Is pretty interesting it adds something to look at other then the sunset and water!. Nice lighting good job!.

The one called "Birds on a roof" It's to casual and normal, plus you can hardly see the Starling's faces, so not that great of a composition going!. And the background is real flashy and the christmas lights kind of crack me up!.

Now, the birds in the sand really are just birds in the sand, nothing really great going on, the colors of the birds blend into all the sand!. There really isn't much to look at in this photo!.

Now I like the chipmunk but it isn't using the rule of thirds!. Plus if you could of managed to get slightly closer to the Chipmunk you would of had something to brag about, cause not to many people can stalk animals to good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

the first one is the best

1)super good lightnign and angle in there, and the effect of the mini cannon

2)preety good, it would be perfect if that 2 red dots in the bottom is there, but its super good

3)too much light, its so white, you kinda edit it somehow in photoshop and use cooling filter to make it in the eye cooler, its kinda striking in the eye!.!. but preety cool

4)ooooooooo, nice camaflouging effect (<<wrong spelling) very nice on this one

5)like no!.4 but now new there!.!.!.

i'm kinda curious what brand of camera are you using, i'll guess!.!.!.

u'mm, i dont know but i think its cannon!.!.!. hehe ^_^ i'd like to know what brand of camera are you using


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The first one is gorgeous, love the color
2nd-also very nice, i like the sharpness in the pic
the sand naps-again, very sharp, just would like to see a little more variety in the color of the backdrop!.
the chipmunk pics-just don't do it for me, but that's just my opinion!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I commented on the photos in your photostream!.

Work hard on composition and depth, that's your weak spots!. You do well with exposure!. Ignore the praise for now and just work harder!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well, on a Fine Art perspective, they arent of much value!. On a documentary perspective, they're good!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

interesting composition but i wouldn't buy prints of them or anything!. maybe try to find a way to make them more unique!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

im no professional photographer but these are beautiful!. i appreciate themWww@QuestionHome@Com