Ok, so im editing a picture of my sister.. What can i do to improve it? [[Pics i

Question: Ok, so im editing a picture of my sister!.!. What can i do to improve it!? [[Pics included]] o!.O!?

I just started editing pictures today for the first time, and this is the first one I did!. Tell me if it's too much, and if it doesn't look good enough what can I do to fix it!?

Thanks!.

Starting Picture:
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Ending Picture:
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

It's a rather good first attempt, though I would have to say that it is too much!. I do applaud you for recognizing that there is such a thing as too much photo editing though!.

I feel that the gamma is just a bit high; that's a mistake I used to do a lot!. I used to feel like more color was better, but too much of it can give it a definite "burning" feel in terms of the color, making it a little harsh particularly around the cheek!. You lose some of the softness of contours on the face with too high gamma!.

Though, despite that, I don't feel like there's really any glaring errors!. Just keep practicing and fine tuning and you'll be fine!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You made her look fake!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I cant go on itWww@QuestionHome@Com

it looks really good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow it looks amazing now good work!Www@QuestionHome@Com