Critiques welcome on this photo?

Question: Critiques welcome on this photo!?

I just got some pocket wizards and this was my first time using them!. What do you think!?
http://doctorkipper!.deviantart!.com/art/w!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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that picture is sick!! (in a good way)

I'd like someone to take a picture of me like that!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow, amazing picture!.!.!.
you are good at what you do!.!.!.

but some helpful fashion advice

the dress so doesnt match the scene

(she would look better in somthing lighter, maybe to add a contrast)

(but if you wanted to go with the "rustic" look, she should wear something less Prom of '99)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well shot, but they come across as a little to forced to me!. Seems like you are TRYING to be artsy!. Could just be me though!. They are well taken, but I don't think I like the photographs would be the best way to say it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

what are pocket wizards!? (humour me, im old)

nice shot though!.!.!. different, simple and effective!. great colours, and good compo!.!.!. you even have good shadows! Www@QuestionHome@Com

I really like it!. It's kind of demented but not at the same time!. I like the angles!. It's a very interesting and beautiful photo!. Cool!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it but the lighting seems off, the difference between the lighting on her and the lighting outside the windowWww@QuestionHome@Com

Is that a brick wall in the right upper corner of the photo!? I see some purple drawling or something, maybe edit it out!?

Looks wonderful! Congrads!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

One word sums it up quite nicely:

WOW!.

It's so cool! I love the pop of the dress and the little bits of purple in the opposite corners!. It's awesome!!!!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

very nice!. i love the shadowing and light!. very cool!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'd like to see how the red would look a little brighter!. Composition is nice though!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Cool I really like it's very creativeWww@QuestionHome@Com

Very nice
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Cool!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like it alot!.Www@QuestionHome@Com