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ralph waldo emerson

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your drawing is really good,it takes time to master human face drawing!.however
1!.the tone is not well applied!.ie,the shadows on the face should have been more darker!.
2!.there is no smoothness,there is no adequate merging between the dark and white!.
3!.there is poor definition on the overall drawing!.

i`ll advise you to look for examples in books and + a tip use tissue paper scrub it on a pen or charcoal or even dry pastel,you`ll see the results, it will give smoothness and merge the tones,Www@QuestionHome@Com

Winston!.!.!.!.!. I love it:)
I love the graphic quality, its sculptural look!.
Now, I don't know if it's because of the quality
of the photo or the drawing itself, but go for
some contrast to give it some zing!. And don't
ever let the edges of the paper (canvas,
whatever!.!.), dictate the size of your expression!.
Make "it" work for "you!."

Keep up the good work!.!.!.!. I think it's great!

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The overall drawing is good but the shading needs a lot of work!. you've smudged the graphite way too much in some places, and the contrasts could be a lot darker!.
keep practicing =]Www@QuestionHome@Com

he!.!.!. look'a like'a man!.!.!.!. (saturday night live)
really though its a good drawingWww@QuestionHome@Com

It has sharp edges!.!. I don't like that!.
But generally it's good :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

It looks like him!. I give you an A+!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com