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Question: Angel sketch!? how can i improve!?
can anybody tell me ways to improve this please
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I would move the light to have it coming from above, and keep it soft!., it seems to get too bright at the bottom of the sketch!.
The arms look different, I think because the angle from where she is sitting they would look that way, one you are looking at more full on, and the other from the side, so I don't think I would change that!.
I would put some type of graceful drape on her, rather than nude!.
The wings are beautiful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Make the right arm match the left!. Add more contrast, by using a charcoal or just increasing the contrast and change the lighting!. Add more shading to make her skin less of a sketch nd more of a finished, shaded workWww@QuestionHome@Com

that's really good! maybe make her right arm a bit thicker!.!.!.it seems thinner than the left one, and also maybe have her hair hang down more since her head's down!. You did the shading very nicely and I love her wings! hope I helped =)Www@QuestionHome@Com

ummm would be good if it was ur drawing!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com