Will you critique my art?

Question: Will you critique my art!?

http://hopeful-uni!.deviantart!.com/
I want to improve but I don't know how!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

in the top one, the eyes are too far apart, but you seem to have everything in proportion, for anime art anyway!

They need more colour though, but apart from that they are quite goodWww@QuestionHome@Com

hey your good!
add some color !!Www@QuestionHome@Com

u got skillz that killz ms!. ally!.Www@QuestionHome@Com