What can i do to improve the next video?

Question: What can i do to improve the next video!?

this video was done with Power Director 5

http://www!.youtube!.com/watch!?v=QIivKN8FP!.!.!.

what improvements could be made, like video editing tips or suggestions!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

That is hilarious!. !. !. but so wrong in so many ways!. LOL!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com