Critique my art. (=?

Question: Rate / Critique my art!. (=!?

one being the greatest and ten being the worst!. constructive critisism is welcome!.
p!.s!. for the critisism: i do not use anatomy, he is intentionaly funky shaped!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

(I rate VERY tough, mind you) ******(6) out of **********(10) I rate on the fact that I am not personally that into abstract/wonky anatomy, and I've seen and talked with lots of REALLY EPICLY AMAZING artists, which effect my view on how 'good' amature art really is!.

Hhhhhhm!. While I can see the dramatic point you are trying to get across, I would feel a lot more comfortable critiquing something less abstract (Since even the worst of artists can be good at it!) However, I do enjoy!.!.!. What ever the picture is called!. =3 The only thing that really irks me is the almost partially shaded look, and the shading that is there doesn't seem to have a set light-point!. You may want to work up on shadows/light sources to get better acquainted with them!. also, the lack of highlights on the face make it appear featureless!.!.!. Like!.!.!. Having NO cheeks, eyes, lips!.!.!. Just a flat cutout!. It doesn't seem to fit with the rest of the image!.

Other than that, I'm quite fond of it!. You have a really bold inking style that jumps out and looks great!. If you don't have a dA, you should get one!.

also, keep in mind, these are all just my personal opinions, and others will think differently!. Good luck in the art world!Www@QuestionHome@Com

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are the limbs supposed to look like they're sticking out!? the lines are really ridgid, not smooth!. If that makes sense!.
But art is to show your view on things, what things look like from your perspective, or what you're trying to show the audience what something is, I guess!.!.!. Oh I don't know!.
Anyway it's a good picture :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

i really love that! i love pen sketches, and i have to say this one is amazing! i love the detail and the shading, it shows grate skills, il give it a 9 out of 10Www@QuestionHome@Com

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it looks cool!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i rate it 5 out of 10!. Nice work and the dark lines looks cool!.Www@QuestionHome@Com