rate from 1-10
do u like it
what should i change
i made him up for my story im gonna make
sorry the pic is not straight
my scanner made some parts lighter again ><
Clyde-http://fausto456!.deviantart!.com/art/Clyd!.!.!.
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do u like it what should i change i made him up for my story im gonna make sorry the pic is not straight my scanner made some parts lighter again >< Clyde-http://fausto456!.deviantart!.com/art/Clyd!.!.!. ThankzWww@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I really like the pose you put him in!. However, some details to his pants would be nice!. You put alot of wrinkles and details to his shirt, but his pants are so bare!. In total I would say 8/10Www@QuestionHome@Com 10 being the best I've ever seen and 1 being a stick figure I'd give you a 2-3 Now of course your going to take that personal but remember 10 is really really mind blowing work!. So first off, It's supposed to be scary right!? Well 90 percent of the page is white!. This should be a dark image!. right now all I see is an outline of a dude on a blank page!. the content is lacking because we cannot imagine this figure in real life!. You must first put him in a situation our minds can believe!. A dark alley or something!. the character himself has some anatomical issues!. look at his left arm (not our left, his left) The upper arm is twice as long as his right!. twice is a lot!. His torso is too long!. There is nothing to his chest!. If you're going to show it gotta put in some details!. He is holding the knife in a non fighting position (very gently as well) if we want to feel threatened then he's gotta be ready to stab!. The lines in the fabric are very unrealistic!. I would look at someone in those kinda clothes and get some realistic folds in there!. add shading! Ease off on the use of lines!. Look how little this piece depends on outlines!. (take all the lines out and we still know exactly whats going on!. http://www!.sliceofscifi!.com/wp-content/u!.!.!. It seems like you were avoiding the legs and feet, I would work on that!. Keep it up!Www@QuestionHome@Com you are a good artist but i would prefer something more optimistic and not as "harsh"!. i give it a 7 for talent, 3 for content!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Destroy earth and the humanity is terrible grammar!.Www@QuestionHome@Com kind of creepy but you can drawWww@QuestionHome@Com i must admit it is a little creepy, but very good drawing!. i would recommend maybe to try shading!. just a thought!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |