Please give me a feedback on this artwork of mine ?

Question: Please give me a feedback on this artwork of mine !?

hi guys
could you tell me the places i can improve on my artworks!.

http://i223!.photobucket!.com/albums/dd98/!.!.!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Awsome, your way better at shading then me!. Get a deviantart account like me, other artist can give you pointers aswell!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You are off to a really good start!. You should just put in more detail and describe things more!. You can practice this by actually looking at something, then drawing it with pencil or pen!. You may consider drawings lots of people's faces!.!.!.!.maybe you could ask a friend to sit still for you so you can draw them!. Very cool color choices on you pic though!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The main thing is to add more detail!. also,
you could improve on shading!. The face is off just a bit in the chin area!?

Other that that, it looks great!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

some of your shading contradicted itself like there was multiple light sources hidden in the hairWww@QuestionHome@Com