Does this look good?

Question: Does this look good!?

http://s129!.photobucket!.com/albums/p224/!.!.!.

sorry i dont want to put my face on here, but does the editing look good or no!.!.it looks weird to me

i want to spice it up a bit but how could i any ideas!?

i love how much air i got hahaWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Too much flash from the camera on the subject matter and the subject has been cut off from the viewer by the frame of the photo!. The hand at one end and the finger tips on the other hand!.
There is far too much space below the subject and the background is too dark!.
The background itself is cluttered taking the eyes away from the subject as well as confusing the audience!.
If you are going to do anything to spice it up then darken the foreground, lighten the background and mute the distractions like the car, and the sidewalk!.
Real nice hair though, shame about the face!Www@QuestionHome@Com

The concept is okay but the flash is too powerful and creates an unpleasant effect!. Try this is a part puring the day with less distracting things around you and no flash just natural light!. I think that would work out much better!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I don't know how to spice it up, but I think you used the brightening tool too much!. Good editing should be hard to detect, and in this picture it is apparent!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

not really its prett bad!.!.!.it makes you look fattish!.!.!.and yuo might not be fat but the shirt makes you look that way wen you jump!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Do something with your shirt, there is to much of your shirt color n the background color, its too darkWww@QuestionHome@Com

That looks exactly like one that someone in my photography class took!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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I do not like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com