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I have done a text about street art and I would like find somebody to correct it!. It's not a long text :
This new type of art is in development, street artist’s motivations are as varied as the artists themselves!. Street artists such as Banksy have earned international attention for their work!.
In my opinion street art is more and more famous because it is a novelty for everyone!.
It’s not simple graffiti’s as you can see in station for example, it’s a art where artists express their opinion, their feelings with an original way!.
It has got nothing to do with painters, because they work in the street and there is not problem with the genuineness of the paint!.
Melbourne has become famous around the world and is home to some of the world's best street art although is Sao Paulo who generally viewed as the capital of street art with the colourful atmosphere of this city, street art is everywhere in progress!.
Banksys has worked in Melbourne and it’s there that Banksys has been recognised!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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This new type of art is in development, street artists' motivations are as varied as the artists themselves!. Street artists, such as Banksy, have earned international attention for their work!.
In my opinion, street art is gaining renown because it is a novelty for everyone!.
It’s not simple graffiti as you can see in stations, for example, its an art where artists express their opinions and their feelings in an original way!.
It has got nothing to do with painters, because they work in the street and there is not problem with the genuineness of the paint!.(NOTE I don't know what you mean by this paragraph)
Melbourne's street art has become famous around the world and is home to some of the world's best!. However, Sao Paulo is generally viewed as the capital of street art with the colourful atmosphere of this city, street art is everywhere in progress!.
Banksy has worked in Melbourne and it’s there that he/she has gained recognition!.
I like street art, it’s different, I think that it “dresses” streets and I like the fact that it reduces "seedy" graffiti !.
Street artists are those whose work is still largely done without official approval in public areas, they can be a little anarchic!.
Street art can be a powerful platform for touching the public and highlighting current and important subjects!.
Hope that this helps!Www@QuestionHome@Com
hi i would like to help you, is it redrafting that you need!? and is this just part of the text or is it a small text!?
i can paste and redraft if you would like, please edit your question and let me know!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
You can help your self you know a lot about the subject all you do is start to develop your street artWww@QuestionHome@Com