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Question: Im making a song!?
I'm trying to make a song but i don't know if its good to our ears :)

title:Take It Or Leave

If you wanna love me,
Don’t wanna see you with other girls
If you wanna make it
You simply have to play by the rules

[Chorus:]

Come now take it or leave it
There’s no other way to my heart
There are things that we need to follow
Or else we’ll break it from the start

Come now take it or leave it
There’s no other way to my heart
If you can’t we won’t make it tomorrow
There’s no better way to start

If you wanna have me,
Send me flower each passing day
You gotta be romantic
You gotta have my feet swept away

Come now take it or leave it
There’s no other way to my heart
There are things that we need to follow
Or else we’ll break it from the start

Come now take it or leave it
There’s no other way to my heart
If you can’t we won’t make
It tomorrow
There’s no better way to start

[Bridge:]
If i'm asking too much
It's because i'd be giving my heart

If you wanna have me
You gotta be tender each passing day
If you think we'll make it
You cross right now and don't hesitate

Come now
Take it or leave it there's no other way to my heart
There are things that we need to follow
Or else we'll break it from the start

Come now take it or leave it
There’s no other way to my heart
If you can’t we won’t make it tomorrow
There’s no better way to startWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
its good!
but it kinda reminds me of Take me or Leave me from Rent!.Www@QuestionHome@Com