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Question: Hey Everyone! I need URGENT help with a scene for a Script - PLEASE help! Thanks!!?
Whoever can finish this line, well, i'll be the happiest person on the planet because I've had writers block for over a month now!.

A couple, Michael and Yvonne Watt, have been married for 20 yrs!. She's English & he's American & she hates his guts & thinks he's not good enough for her, but he is always tolerant!. They've had a hectic adventurous night, escaping from a serial killer; being in a car chase & surviving death-defying situations & now they've discovered an underground passage!. Michael tries to make conversation by saying "Where do you think this leads"!. Yvonne turns to him and says "You know what Michael, I don't know!. But !.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!."

Her line has to be absolutely true; real and emotional!. She is exhausted & is completely & utterly at a loss with herself!. The line has to tell the audience the relationship is definitly over, for good, but shouldn't be nasty!. Just emotional & real!. Michael will look helplessly after her when she says it!. It has to be sad & tragic!.

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But!.!.if THIS passage gives me safety; a warm clean bed, a nice cup of tea and!.!.and!.!.oh I don't know, Michael! Nothing can ever be guaranteed in unpredictable situations!.!.I don't know where it will lead to be honest I just want this to be over!.!.this night!.!.THIS!.!.!.what is this anyway Michael!? what are we doing here!? This doesn't feel right!.!.it never did!.!.who are we trying to fool!? I've tried to convince myself that it will be ok!.!.!.that we would be ok!. I can't do that any longer, Michael!.!.!.!.I won't!. I want to go home!.!.!.I just want to go home!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Personally in a situation like that I dont think that conversation would come up!. But she is English who knows!.

I dont know, But I think the time has come for us to part ways!. And she walks off with out him!.

:: In sarcasm:: She rounds the corner and catches bullet from the serial killer !.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

But, maybe it leads away from the last twenty years of my life!.

But maybe, it's to a better life with other people!.

Those are just some ideas! =)
What's this play fro anyway, are you writing one for a troupe!? How cool is that!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

But!.!.!.!.!.!.This relationship is the only thing i can see where it leads too!

sorry i don't know where else to go with that!.
i can see why you were so troubled with this!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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