etc. for TV?

Question:I just put together a sort of mini-commercial for work. Do I have the "it" factor I need to make it on TV? Opinions?

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I just put together a sort of mini-commercial for work. Do I have the "it" factor I need to make it on TV? Opinions?

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sadly it's not really for us to decide obviously. because the only way you will get cast for anything is if you have what THEY WANT.
all directors are looking for something different. not different as unique different as they KNOW what they are looking for and the KNOW when it's you or when it's not. especially when it comes to tv.
but you have great pronunciation and that's great.
take acting classes too because no matter how good you think you are make sure you have something to back it up because the tv producers and casters will knock you back down.

That was you? That was great! You'd be perfect for commercials!

Kinda boring...get more exciting...other than that its good

you have a good voice and look smart. for tv maybe different clothes and longer hair, or different hair cut.

id say change the clothes, but other than that it seemed convincing

I think so for more commercials and whatnot, I don't know about acting, because...i haven't seen ya act! but seriously, i think you speak with so much confidence, and clearly, that you would do good making presentations, or something on those lines as well.

Well, your okay, but nothing special. I think you might be able to get some work, but I wouldn't quit your day job.

yes perfect for tv but,

you have the right gestures movements while explaining but, you need to add some background stuff like an advertisement would look like if you know what I mean. the camera actions are perfect and the demonstration. the flaw is that you need to give it purpose instead of talking and talking. dont look back at the computer while talking or it might seem home made. you should be filmed with the product (the camera focusing at you) next to you in your hands in front of the computer. Also say stuff like " see now, one of the reasons this is..." and "another great thing is that" Dont make the whole explanation just get the important top facts and features on the commercial, it probaly shouldnt be that long. the thing on 0:49 is fine. at the end, put a thing that says " to get yours call" or "at local best buy" and stuff like that. at the beginning dont make it look like a plain explanation. like i said, have the product with you and a reasonable background like the computer. this should be good if you know what i was trying to explain to you.

yeah that was awesome! a little long for a commercial but your voice and the speed that were talking was great. that would totally work for a t.v.comercail.