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Question: What is your opinion of my poem's poem!?
By Elaine Polin

Once my words are written,
sent as photons of light,
they are as carved in stone,
impossible to delete
by their recipient!.

Fearing the keyboard’s power,
in pain, I clench my fist,
that my words' sharp, forged point
not carve a forever wound
into real, virtual flesh!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
The pen is mightier than the sword, but now it moves at lightning speed and cuts with laser sharpness!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I liked this a lot!. Just watch out for sydney k and show some respect!. Both the freak iano!. 2 of his 400 avatars!. This guy really has one lonely life when he has to take another persons avatar!.
I am watching all of you!.
"The Troll Hunter"Www@QuestionHome@Com

On first read, I thought, "I don't do this, I don't worry" but on re-read I realized I do consider the impact, of course, on my reader!. Especially if it's something personally dark and painful!. Great write!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Powerful words,we should heed this message!.As to some of the answers I ask "Show some respect" please do just that!.--Sydney K if you can't say anything nice, then don't say anything!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hopefully not novel, a poet with a conscience! lol Words however written should have time to settle!. If then indeed they sting, it was the poet's wish, not mistake!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, we all know 'the pen is mightier than the sword!.' We should wield it carefully, even when the 'pen' is a keyboard!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Most words seem curt through this machine, unless very careful!.
Good one!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

We should all fear our keyboards power, and seek to tame it!. Well done E!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Thats goodWww@QuestionHome@Com

forget about carving this in stone this is not even worth writing down on paperWww@QuestionHome@Com

find a new hobbyWww@QuestionHome@Com