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Question: Dose anyone like this poem!?!?!?!? i wrote it myself!?
so i was here and you were there
and you came walking by
we looked each other in the eyes
and then we both said hi
as i breathed in through my nose
your perfume was so sweet
then i knew what was happening
as i moved my feet
i wonder about when i get there
will everything be alright
but its allready happening
my pants are getting tight
and as i think of your butt
through that tight pink skirt
i burst right through the bathroom
doors as it starts to hurt
i reach out for the stall door
with a vision of your butt
then i realize its to late
i already busted my nutWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I kinda thought that it was stupid!. I mean what kind of person would like something like that!? Not a very smart one I guess!. You should work on it a little more!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

I needed that laugh so early in the morning!
I love a man with a good sense of humor :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

rude but funny
true but sick

no i think its lewdWww@QuestionHome@Com