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Question: I need a title for my poem!!?
What would be a good title for this poem that I wrote!?!?
also could you say if it is good or bad, I wrote this for an english project and someone said it was really good

Daddy always said that I was God's little angel!.
I was told to never lie, and I tried to never fib!.
I was never able to live up to Dad's high standard
Little by little I was slipping from Dad's grasp
I was pushing the limit, and feeding Dad's wrath!.

Someone gave me a bottle, something good he had said
A little sip, and I slipped into perfect happiness
Three short months later, someone found out my secret
Daddy kept it quiet, a pastor couldn't have this happen
Word got out and his reputation destroyed
his innocent daughter wasn't as innocent as they thought

Two months later I found out who
He was a boy himself, not even a man
I told him what I thought, and He knew it too
He said to keep quiet, so no one else would know
We agreed and went on our lives needing to mend

The town was in shock, the neighbors chatted
Rumors spread rampant, it made me feel worse!.
Thank goodness He was there, the pain would ease
as long as he was around I felt at least one friend
Two new loves were growing, both were not planned

Five months later, I held her for the first time
She was first unwanted, but now was loved
The first nights were torture, as well as the days
I couldn't walk down the street with a scandalous stare
It didn't matter though, as He was by my side

We got married later that year,
He loved me for who I really was!.
Life was looking good, perfect it seemed
All the badness was gone and life was just fine
I was in love, and live was perfect to me

It was not any fault of his own!.
but he just couldn't do it
He tried so hard, and failed again and agin
He said he was sorry, that he couldn't provide
He left me a month later, with regret in his eyes

Now truly on my own I felt so alone
I soon gave up, my will was gone
I lost my temper—just one small moment
Then I saw what I had just done!.
I died that night, beside my beautiful dead child!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Fallen Angel'sWww@QuestionHome@Com

Suicide stroke


Misery on me

Calamity conclusion


Pain I feel

overall mishap

crestfallen cycle

hope i helped!. that was all i could think of!. (:Www@QuestionHome@Com

The demisal Love!.!.!. very touching and sad!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hearts and tears!.Thats all i can come up with,sorry!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow, that is sad, but sorry have no titleWww@QuestionHome@Com

Ridden!.!.!.!.(like guilt ridden)!?!?
or Fault!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com