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It is for school!.!.!.!.

Is there reason for war!?
What is all the fighting for!?
For broken hearts, blood, and gore!?
Many hearts are torn
Many are injured or killed
Then mindlessly their places are filled
So many emotions fill the air

Love, hate, nervousness, excitement, regret
Some say don’t fret
It will be over soon

* WHat should the next line be!? I am having trouble! The ending word needs to rhyme with soonWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
This is such a good poem!.!.!.I really like it!.!.!.!.
Try Http://Www!.poetry!.com
They have a thing that comes up with rhyming words!.
I wouldn't change it in any way!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

how about-
it will be over soon
but not before a lagoon!.

it will be over soon
but not before the midnight moon
it will be over soon
and not to start with noon!.

hope that helps!.
because that is all I got for now!.

Iam a poetry Writer even though iam in middle school!.

contain your excitement and think of the moonWww@QuestionHome@Com