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New love poem rate please!?
sitting under a tree
thinking about thee
the winter hath pass
for summer's breeze
the waves rock of the shore
while the moon glistens of the beach
I look to the heavens
into the starry sky
staring back at me
green, red, and yellow
is natures delight
and all of this
while looking into your eyesWww@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
the poem is awesome excerpt for the green, red and yellow part!. if you have to give it human form you have to make it a little more realistic!.
but i love it!. It's deep and sincere!.
keep it up!.
you got it going!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is such a good poem!.!.!.I really like it!.!.!.!.
They have free poetry contests, and they've published me before!.
I wouldn't change it in any way!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
aL i CAN SAY IS YOU ARE BETTER THAN ME, KEEP TRYING!.Www@QuestionHome@Com