Here is a poem I just wrote, it's not very long, and I haven't even thought it over and corrected it!. I just want to put it out here right now!. I can take criticism!. Here it is :
She lays there torn apart, the pieces of her spread all over the ground!. If she could only find her arms, so she could find her feet, she could pull herself together!. But then, in the core of her sobs she realizes she still has one part attached & it's pushing everything else farther away!. But, how did it survive, when everything else is gone!? The answer is, it survived the crash, but it broke!. Soon it will be gone, too!.Www@QuestionHome@Com