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Question: What ya think of poem!.!?
Looking within

and feeling so much pain

a hearth

torn into a million pieces

as my hearth tries to beat

to see another day

finding withing to somehow

find my strength again

as i wonder finding a way out

to see if i can start again

powder my past memories

have been lost in the pain

as it rains hiding my tears of pain

catching my breath as

I start to live again

An open road

as my life begins

again with new


and for my past it's

close road that

has come to an


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
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and i'll never go back,
on that path again,
i've closed that road,
as i've already said,
and no matter what,
i might still remember my past,
but i won't ever shed a tear,
'cause its over now!.

that really touched me!.!. we all have some dark secrets or some bad past!.!. what you've written is really cool!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

nice! i like the way you ended it!. it was a little fluffy, but other than that it was goodWww@QuestionHome@Com