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I think I've discovered what life is!.
Life is the opposite of

Emptiness is death
while alive!.

Life cannot exist in
a void,
something must

anything, but not

Or, perhaps I've discovered what life
is not!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Life is not nothing!. Excellent use of words to honor life!. You are wonderful, you know that!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I liked that, space isn't nothing though it is part of the something!.

"It is the spaces between the notes that make the music"
I read something like that once, I cant seem to find the quote!.

Yes a list of what is not, is shorter then a list of what is & what is, is whatever we might think I guess!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A pondering life time mystery, what was is, what is was!.
If life is grief, then life is full and empty at the same time!.

Someone is always leaving, coming, and without breath there is no life,
maybe all that life truly is,is breath!. (My thoughts)

And I have heard it said, "Just be"Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow, that's got me thinking upside down and all around!.

I think you have figured out what life is, or isn't!.

My feelings are that life coexist with death, we die a little every time we sleep in preparation for our final homegoing!.

Life is embryonic!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Nature, the scientists say, abhors a vacuum!. Perhaps Hoover has the meaning of life hidden in its tubes and bags and brushes somewhere!.!.!. who knows!?

I raise my morning coffee to always have something in our lives!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i'm happy to be alive!. ; )
if you don't have a love for something in your life, or value something other than yourself, then it would be very empty!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I know emptiness, I know emotional death
This is a poem very economically written!. I envy your lack of the verbose plague!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Personally speaking
life is about meaning,
meaning implies content
content must be absence of void
So concordance!. I agree!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Life is nothing,without something And something life is not

Thought-provoking!. Nice write!. I can't help thinking!.!.!.there has to be more than this!. (hehehe!.!.!.not in your poem!. I mean to life!. There must be, surely!.!.!.)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Perhaps not, I think!. Life is community!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

air and life are one of the same!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Ma, you've opened the floodgates on your muse!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'm soooo glad that I have something to fill up that emptiness Ma!!
I like this!Www@QuestionHome@Com

There is no void here, Ma!.
Meaningful poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Right now, pain coexists!. I feel like living death!.

This is good, Ma! Ouch!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

contemplating this!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

"Emptiness is death!.!.!.!.!.

!.!.!.!.!.!.while alive!.!.!."

we all!.!.!.!.

!.!.!.!.!.fear this one!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sounds like you got it 'right on'!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

In my world today, pain is the existence!. Nice one this!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Why do peoples mind run along same lines!?Www@QuestionHome@Com