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Question: Do you like my other poem!? HONEST ANSWERS!?
Who are you!?
I live with her, I watch her all day!.
My whole life, I have never left her side!.
When I see her, what can I say!?
Ive seen before that she has lied!.
But there is something about this girl I dont understand!.
If I reach out to her will I perish!?
She is like an hourglass dripping sand!.
If I get to her before time stops, will I have someone to cherish!?
Today I tried to reach out!.
She looks in the mirror and starres!.
Our eyes started to flow like a kettle spout!.
Those eyes are beautiful but have a deathly glare!.
I put my hand up as she mirrored my actions!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
whoa that is really good!.
i wish i could write something like that
i have an exam on tuesday for poetry in english and i totally dont get it !.
i have some poetry questions on my page if you can help me answer them : )
that poem is rates 10 out of 10 !.!. very good :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow, I really like the metaphors!Www@QuestionHome@Com

very nice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

its okWww@QuestionHome@Com