Position:Home>Poetry> Do you guys like this poem? im only 13 :)?
Question: Do you guys like this poem!? im only 13 :)!?
Love is an Ocean
In the beginning slow and calm
Love so small it could fit in my palm
Mysterious, chasing back and forth; up and down
I’m sure this love will never drown
Perfect, maybe, too Perfect
Suddenly I see it, a horrible conflict
Waves start turning
Tempers start burning
Waves start crashing to the shore
This doesn’t feel like the love I felt before
Its over, Its done
There goes my beautiful sun
I venture back out
I promise myself this won’t happen again
Here we go, my Love Story beginsWww@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
this is soo good : )Www@QuestionHome@Com
The end is what makes it good!. But you shouldn't have to qualify it by saying you're only thirteen!. Either it's good or it's not!. And it's okay to not be "good" so long as you're trying to get better!. People become great, they aren't born that way!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Honestly, I loved it; it was very!.!.!.poetic and serene!. Well written, eloquent!. Yup i liked it!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com
wow you should publish it lol no joke!. that's pretty spot on about loveWww@QuestionHome@Com
its sweet ;]Www@QuestionHome@Com
yeah i like it =]Www@QuestionHome@Com
that is awesome =D
your really good at thisWww@QuestionHome@Com
i absolutely love it!!!!! wow ur a good poet!Www@QuestionHome@Com