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Question: Do u like this poem!.!.!?
My playmate, say, do u want 2 be,
Do u want 2 always, always play,
do u want 2 go into the dark together,
with a child's heart look important to me
With great dignity sit at the front table
Pour with measurement from wine-water
and gapingly soving bad clothes!?
Do u want 2 play with me!?
Do u want 2 play everything, that is life
Snowy winters and long-long falls,
Can I drink silently tea besides u
with satire tea and yellow fogs!?
Do u wanna live life 2 the fully
Listening long terms and sometimes be scared
That on the rood turn November will come
this is the street sweeper, pour, sick man
who whistles under our window wall !?
Do u wanna play snakes, birds
long trips, train, ships,
Christmas, dreams, and all that is good!?
Do u wanna play happy lover,
pretend 2 cry, luxurious cemeteries
Do u wanna live forever
live forever in the game, which comes true and again, and again!?
Among the flowers to be swept away on the ground
and do u wanna, do u wanna play ur death!?
Which will come around!.!.!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Hi Waffles,
I want 2 play,i want 2 play the game of Life!.!. Very different and so True the game of Life is hard but we do go on!.!. I really like your poem and would like to read more(if you have more) A Big Star for your poem My New Friend!.
Your Friend,

I would with proper punctuation and grammar!. Great, twice above average otherwise!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Its very different, You are very creative I like itWww@QuestionHome@Com

nice for a goat!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

!.!.!.!. Yuck!. get over yourself!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Just the two first wordsWww@QuestionHome@Com

Another great poem Waffles!.
I never knew goats were good at poetry!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's good!. Sounds a little scary!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Have a star :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

em no sorryWww@QuestionHome@Com

its goodWww@QuestionHome@Com

your so sweet waffles!. niceWww@QuestionHome@Com

Hmnn, you are bored!.!.!.right!? Tempting fate!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

some parts don't make much sense at all but i still like itWww@QuestionHome@Com