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What do you think of this poem describing beauty of a women !?
When sun kisses her face,
and moon comes out of his hiding place!.
birds almost forget to sing,
as gust of wind,
rushes towards her silky hair
which makes most men stop and stare!.
blooming lips painted by artists pen
She is part of dreams of many men,
the lady in red walks very proud
ignoring everyone up and around!.
The crystal in her eyes,the purity of her soul,
,makes on wonder
God must have sculpted her after lot of thought
making her immortal as if he almost forgot!.
Intoxicated by her beauty men forget wine,
she is the rose among flowers,
such is her beauty divine!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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This is very beautiful!. You have an obvious love and respect for women!. Let us not forget, however, outer beauty fades!. I want to be loved more for my heart!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is correct that beautyness describe a poet is not wrong, but if a poet forget a change of world is wrong!. in the historical places like Alora in India, Egypt pyramid Cliopatra, drawn paints of beautiness of women more there are million of historical novel wrote by greate poets the beautiness of women, infact, we did not find entire beutiness of world, even you can recognize the beautiness of women!. The first generator of world is woemen!.
and the first scavenger also women for human being, I appreciate and thankful to the god that he created my mother!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I want to say it's shallow, because it says nothing about her kindness, warm heart, carefree laugh or intoxicating voice, but it was just too beautiful
This poem was by far the best I have read today!.
It's inferior, very much so, but would you mind commenting mine!? (I have 2 up)Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is written extremely well!. Excellent use of metaphors!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
You have described the lady in red well!. Nice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
this is beautiful
i like the imageryWww@QuestionHome@Com
u write really good poems!.!.!.i love itWww@QuestionHome@Com
I just gave you my analysis so that you may come up with something more brilliant next time!.
You are right, I may be completely wrong!. Good effort!. Keep it up!.