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Question: Can you help me write this poem!?
ok so here is the format
line 1:a metaphor
line 2 begins with "when" "who" or "why"
line 3 begins with "how" when" or "why"
line 4 also begins with "how" "when" or "why"
line 5 begins with "how" "when" or "why"

i cant think of any metaphors to use!. they should be pretty simple the examples given were jealousy is a knife and a pen is a swor!. unfortunatly i cant use those!! 10 pts to best poem, i will choose tonight!! thanksWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
She was a feather in my arms!.
Who was this delicate creature!?
Why did I have to find her in such a bad way!?!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.or (who would want do her any harm)
How long had she been lying there helpless!.!.!.shivering!?
When I look at her, I feel protective!.!.!.maybe even love!.

I'm not sure if this is what you mean!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

you should really write your own work
unless you plan to say it was not written by youWww@QuestionHome@Com