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Question: Do you like my poem!? Honesty please!?
Am I Guilty!?
Am I guilty for expressing the inner me!?
Guilty for crying myself to sleep last night!?
If you look into my eyes, maybe you can see
That I am not always who you see me as!.
My smile runs across my face every minute
But my smile is overcome by a screaming mass!.
Am I guilty, Mom!? For telling my friends I stay alive with a pill!?
For confessing I am not always the happiest one!?
The confusion and tears I shed, it is my kill!.
Maybe one day I will leave earth before you all!.
I love you!. I know you love me!. It is not your fault!.
But sometimes I hear that death is making it's call!.
I am scared!. Where am I going tonight!?
Where will I rest my head tomorrow!?
A hospital bed or in a cremation chamber blowing pure fright!.
Am I guilty for putting this on myself!?
Or was I just overcome!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
this is so emotive
lovely poem
i hope it isn't based on a true story
but it is touchingWww@QuestionHome@Com

wow it's AMAZING

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you could add a picture to it like


wow!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!. that's all I can say!.!.!.!. wow!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com